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Kia Ora Selena, It's quite an interesting discussion you have chosen for a writing topic. Why did you think of this point? Next time maybe be a bit more precise on the point you make as it is sometimes confusing on whether you agree or are opposed to the such point. Have a good one-Luca
I disagree with you because if they got paid they would cheat, fight of the money, steal other students money, and take advantage of it. Next time you could copy and paste the text into the blogger thing instead of having a link.
Hello Selena! How are you today? I agree on your point that children shouldn't be paid to go to school. Imagine what it would be like.. I think It's just good the way it is. Maybe work on your punctuation a little more. And it got a bit confusing reading over the text, so maybe you should double check it. Overall, great job! -Sofiya :))
Kia Ora Selena,
ReplyDeleteIt's quite an interesting discussion you have chosen for a writing topic.
Why did you think of this point?
Next time maybe be a bit more precise on the point you make as it is sometimes confusing on whether you agree or are opposed to the such point.
Have a good one-Luca
Hi Selena,
ReplyDeleteI disagree with you because if they got paid they would cheat, fight of the money, steal other students money, and take advantage of it. Next time you could copy and paste the text into the blogger thing instead of having a link.
-Caitlin
Hello Selena!
ReplyDeleteHow are you today?
I agree on your point that children shouldn't be paid to go to school.
Imagine what it would be like..
I think It's just good the way it is.
Maybe work on your punctuation a little more. And it got a bit confusing reading over the text, so maybe you should double check it.
Overall, great job!
-Sofiya :))